Slunch's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lord of Yearning]

Rendering is really, really solid, would love to see what happened if you lost the edge in shadow and blended it into the background.

Polmnechiac responds:

Thanks. I tried that and it looked kinda crap to my taste, so I just changed the transparency of the background.

[Coco Nebulon x Mina Ashido]

Love your awareness of foreshortening, killing it on the more cel shaded style and I notice your subtle, informed changes in line color especially near the bottom shoe.
(btw lineart is extremely solid, next time try to add a little more variety in line thickness and I think it could really enhance what you've got going on.)

Keep it up, the rest of your work is fantastic but this one really hit the mark.

Luckytime responds:

Thanks for your valuable feedback! The lineart does need more variation, it's especially noticeable from far away. Cheers!

[goggles boy]

this is one handsome boy, good job n god bless our troops

alexapdos responds:

o7

[Newgrounds Girl - Cartoon PinUp]

Tank Woman?

HugoTendaz responds:

Could be. I'm very close of choosing something tank involved.

[Doodle]

Your sense of fabric isn't bad, keep up the good work!

GhoulKitten responds:

Thank you! I will try. :P

[kasldjalsdjasldjaaejresbdfnmsdbf38477777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777777]

After seeing this I became a christian.

yurgenburgen responds:

YEEEEEE

[Gay marriage is so gay!]

Hilarious, also this has been spreading like a wildfire on facebook and reddit!

deathink responds:

PM me some links.

[Teddy]

FIVE STARS YOU GOT THE JOB BUDDY GOODNIGHT I LOVE YOU

MrChambers responds:

I LOVE YOU MORE

[Space Babe]

I love the depth of stars and overall atmosphere.
SPACE IS THE PLACE, MAN.

Rennis5 responds:

Thank you,
this one was a bit of a learning curve, so with any luck the next one will look a lot better.

[Messenger bunny]

Hey man, Crispy sent me dude! There there, everything will be okay, stay gorgeous baby I love you 5/5

xscar10 responds:

While I appreciate the rating and the wishing to stay gorgeous (though I would argue that I never was) , I am very confused as to what's going on. I have no idea who crispy is, but I think you might have found the wrong person.